Do you like this poem?

thats me Asked by sirussurge 11 months ago, 19 answers.

Is being so close a bad thing
or can we for once show
our affection
for the ones we love
cause if ot why do we ssay
I love you
if it doesnt show
we say we love
we say we hate
but we all stay the same
our lives are short
so we love quick
and hate long
we...

dont second think
we dont get a second chance
so is being so close such a bad thing
or for can we for once show
our affection for the ones we love
our love is strong
our hate is weak
we live these lives for
the love we seek
and we die from the hate we fear
so is being so close a bad thing
or can we for once show
our affection for the ones we love
cause if not
why do we say
I love you

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Answered by here2help on Dec 20, 2007, 06:24PM
| 551 answers.

Wow, I like it! Very nice. Good Job.

Answered by funadvice on Dec 20, 2007, 06:34PM
| 42400 answers.

I like it. it's really good. =)

Answered by iffy on Dec 20, 2007, 07:00PM
| 290 answers.

Cute. <3

Answered by lolove on Dec 20, 2007, 08:46PM
| 22 answers.

thats cute

Answered by wester_wildcats on Dec 21, 2007, 01:12AM
| 51 answers.

I love it

Answered by plainwhitets on Dec 23, 2007, 09:02PM
| 570 answers.

I love it :-)

effection is spelt A-F-F-E-C-T-I-O-N :-)

not to be a smart alec or anything...

Answered by funadvice on Dec 26, 2007, 04:02PM
| 42400 answers.

WOW! That is really really good Good Job!

Answered by funadvice on Dec 29, 2007, 08:53AM
| 42400 answers.

aww thats so cute
whoever you give it to would love it
lol

Answered by funadvice on Dec 30, 2007, 10:19AM
| 42400 answers.

WOW!! thats awsome!! good job =D

Answered by funadvice on Dec 30, 2007, 10:52AM
| 42400 answers.

Awww I love it!!! Its awesome!!! good job!! =)

Answered by mack on Jan 01, 2008, 09:30PM
| 85 answers.

its soo cute. =]

love it. <3

Answered by justagirl01 on Jan 05, 2008, 10:42AM
| 9 answers.

woaah ! I lovee it ♥

Answered by chriscross on Jan 13, 2008, 05:13PM
| 132 answers.

that poem is so cool I love writing poems and you did an awesome. Sincerely. Christiana

Answered by funadvice on Jan 18, 2008, 08:34PM
| 42400 answers.

I love it
it was really good

Answered by sportsqt101 on Mar 27, 2008, 12:36PM
| 20 answers.

sooo cute :-)

Answered by singing_angel on Apr 17, 2008, 05:35AM
| 66 answers.

awesome job ...loved the poem you can turn it into a song too..if not I love the poem ...verry awesome job...u should ryte more

Answered by kimis on May 02, 2008, 04:21PM
| 41 answers.

I love the poem it is so cute!!

Answered by imme on May 04, 2008, 08:27AM
| 816 answers.

it's cute! I loved it
you should turn it into a song! it'd be nice

Answered by xxjulixx on May 28, 2008, 06:06PM
| 834 answers.

Looks like you put a lot of thought into it, and that made it turn out beautifully. Continue to write great poems, for you my friend, have talent.

FunMail me for my poems sometime. =]

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