What do you think of this song?

Me and my band wrote this song and want to know if you like it. If you want to edit it, tell me what we should do. Be honest!

You kissed my best friend

Hey you, out of the blue.
I just found someone new.
Just because I never felt anything,
It...

can still be true.

The week before I left
I saw you with her.
Never again will I love someone like you.

Because you kissed my best friend
On the lips!
Standing there, I felt so hopeless.
And no one can ever help me.

Why would you do that?
Invite her over while I went to the store
To get you that cake you’ve been dying to have!
I cried, you just stared.
Like you didn’t even care
That you kissed my best friend.
O, you kissed my best friend.
On the lips.

She waved goodbye and grabbed her things.
Then she winked.
You did too.
You even said “I love you.”
To my best friend!

Because you kissed my best friend
On the lips!
Standing there, I felt so hopeless.
And no one can ever help me.

Why would you do that?
Invite her over while I went to the store.
To get that cake you’ve been dying to have!
I cried, you just stared.
Like you didn’t even care
That you kissed my best friend
O, you kissed my best friend.
On the lips.

My best friend, and you.
Sitting on my couch and kissing, too.
Thinking I could trust both of you.

I fell asleep that night.
Didn’t know if you were alright.
Not that I cared.
Oh, oh.
A few bad dreams and I woke up.
Got a glass of water and went back to bed.

Now I’ll have to live with that memory
Every day.
No one can stop the pain.
My best friend.
And you.
Oh, oh.
My best friend and you.

Because you kissed my best friend
On the lips!
Standing there, I felt so hopeless.
And no one can ever help me.

Why would you do that?
Invite her over while I went to the store
To get that cake you’ve been dying to have!
I cried, you just stared.
Like you didn’t even care
That you kissed my best friend
O, you kissed my best friend.
On the lips.
On the lips.
On the lips.

its ok, a little rough. try editing or revising. maby im just clueless though because I dont know the beat.

submit a music beat sample or tell us where you can get a sample of the beat.Other than that It is a good song!