What do you think of my poem?

Torn

Between two worlds my eyes open up
One has strength
And one has love
I am torn
I want to leave my world
Fall slip tumble into another
Forget my past and how its abused me
Screw lovers they always refuse me
I try to piece back...

together my broken heart
But whatever I do it just falls apart
Love and hate together as one
Im falling
Im slipping
I think im done
Forget the past
It doesn’t matter
I have to warn you
It isn’t pretty
Being torn is such a pity
Decisions are tough
Life can be rough
So forget pain
Forget life
Forget love
The solution to this problem is at the end of a knife
It tears me apart that you are gone
Found inner strength and had moved on
But just like life
Love is easily taken away
So I breathe my last breath with only one thing to say
Don’t deny love
Even if it hurts you
Because I would rather feel pain
Then the emptiness of a cold bitter heart
No I lay here
My heart is being fixed
No longer shattered
Or tangled
Or torn

I like it
its good
I cant write poetry...I want to but what ever I do it dont work out.
lol!

its amzin'
easy 2 read!!! because its all split up!!!
I like it!!!

I like it except parts of it dont rhyme you should work
on that!!