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What do you think of my poem?
Hello, another poem here, and it's called "Discovery."
Please tell me what you think of it, be it good or bad, and please be as detailed as possible. What I am most interested in is how it makes you feel, what images it brings to mind, and impressions...
you're left with.
Love when I hear my spine crack
As you put your arms around me.
Love when I’m facedown in the mud
With your palm on the back of my neck.
God, it’s wonderful.
I’ve got a scalpel in my bag
And you’re probably a little familiar with human anatomy
Start small, but open me up wide
You can probably learn at least
A little something
By peeking around my insides
I’ve got a map written on the underside of my skin--
It’s in a language I’ve forgotten.
Tell me where I‘m from, lover.