What do you think of my poem?

I'm just not sure so be honest please and thank you

Think of how wonder us it would be
if I could right a poem of thee

It would be of the instruments you've played
intelligence laid out
for all to see
instead of just me

It would be of...

manners so polite
lovely like the sky at night

it would be of you and me
us and we

Wait but could it be so lovely
like a painting in front of me
so perfect
so right

It would be of thee and thy
you and I
could it be
so perfectly

But wait could it be
that I love you
and you love me
Think of us
and we
and what should be
what shall be
of you and me

It would be of you and me
us and we
What should I do?
Tell you?
How I feel of you
should I stumble and fall
again
losing my friend

The answer to this
would be the end

I love it, I write poems too

It's awesome, and it is beautiful. This is a touching poem, which can be seen as extremely deep, if you read between the lines. It is deep anyway, without reading between the lines. But here's a tip. Spelling and punctuation help!
Britz

Excellent! I think you're a good poet.
I would like to give you an advice
Please check the spelling. Ok!!!

Bye seeUUU

lovely
any more?

no not right now sorry

its good because