What do you think about my rap?

Tell me what you think about my rap so far

Its s ta the lim when did this $h!t begin
Im fire ta hell because this shits a sin
In the game with the devil he ant ever going to win
He ant ever going to win
He ant ever going to win
What made this life so hard
Getting shot leaving scars
Crimanals get locked behind bars
Make it 18 or be living with the stars

This world isent easy now
With all this $h!t going down
Think your hood is bad
This is my town
Binghamton on solid ground

Oak st waverly ready to get laid
Poast at 1 stop thats a good pay
Hemies stand ya ground you need to get ya yay teens haveing babies every day
My own mom is a crack head
Trying tha thefe my bread
Get shot in the head
Go prostatuite instead
My fatjers locked in jail
Cant get bail
Every day is a life in hell
I got good $h!t need to make a sale

Even these cops looking to get poped
If ya just give it up wont get locked this $h!t gotta stop

If you ant on my team you wont make it to 18 on my block
Mess with us then know you will get shot
I ant scared to get locked
Because im best friends with the head cop

It really needs to be spell checked.

well first off rap without the swearing, learn to do that pretty good and have the same affect as swearing and you are on the way to stardom... Also grammar and spelling hardcore man

R-A-P

Retards Attempting Poetry...

im sorry, but I HATE rap...seems like your rap can use some work though...

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judge all yall want rap is in my blood I dont even think god will like you to be judging on any of the music.whats better listening to rap or going to jail people need to start pointing on drugs not on rap music because drugs kills you not music!