What do you think of my poem

depressed Asked by hollowtears 8 months ago, 4 answers.

Its not really go and I just randomly wrote it around 3 in the morning its called hold my hand

Hold my hand
Hold my hand like you'll never grief
Like we will never leave
Hold my hand as if yesterday doesn't matter anymore and tomorrow will never...

happen
Slowly and painless I slip away
Slowly you sway lost upon a day
Gone forever here I lay

Tell me what you think

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Answered by vultureofculture on Mar 29, 2008, 09:16PM
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I think its really good
lots of passion

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Answered by chuchii on Mar 29, 2008, 09:26PM
| 9 answers.

very nice poem!!! I like it a lot!

Answered by mm711 on Mar 30, 2008, 05:36AM
| 94 answers.

I thought is was very meaningful, and you used good tone and so on. I liked it.

Answered by emo_bubbles on Apr 05, 2008, 07:09PM
| 272 answers.

I think that it is great

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