What do you think about this poem

Love Asked by babygirl22 6 months ago, 4 answers.

There were never strawberries like the ones we had that beautiful day sitting on the soft green grass facing each other your knees held in mine the blue plates in our laps the strawberries glistening in the burning sun we dipped them in suger looking at...

each other not hurrying to eat the stawberries for one to come the empty plates lain on the floor with the two forks crossed and I bent tward you sweet in that air in my arms like a lost child from your eager mouth the taste of stawberries in my memory come back again let me love you let the hot sun burn like our love and summer lightning on this day let the storm wash the plates

Hope you like it!! peace!! ~Babygirl

Answered by funadvice on Jun 13, 2008, 04:18PM
42280 answers

its kinda confuzing and it didnt really seem like a poem 2 me...

Answered by butterfly_kiss3z on Jun 13, 2008, 04:19PM
1332 answers

real hot!! I love it =)

Answered by nirvanafan on Jun 13, 2008, 04:32PM
207 answers

its pretty good...

Answered by babygirl22 on Jun 13, 2008, 04:52PM
208 answers

it a love poem xxk1mm13xx it has to be confuzing

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