What do you think about my poem?

Tell me what you think this is my poem I wrote it!
Title:Please Stop!

Sometimes I just want the world to stop.
I need it to stop.
I beg it to stop.
I plead for it to.
Is there anyone who hears my cries of insanity?
STOP!
Please...I need for the yelling...

to stop.
I need to get my life in order.
The feelings are my mind tearing me apart.
It's too much for me to handel.
Stop I whisper to no one.
I can't take this bitter sweet feeling of love,hate,and confusion.
Just freeze life and let me catch up.
I'm moving in slow motion.
The world is moving too fast for me.I need it all to stop.
Everything is replaying in my head slowly.
I can feel the pain seep through to my face
the tears burn.
As they drop to the ground
They beg for the past to be repeated.
Sometimes I need the world to stop.
BUT IT DOSEN'T!
Stop...I plead butgo through time in my
Daze...
Like a movie my past is relived.
"Big girls don't cry...Say what you ned to say..."
* BUT I CRY!
*BUT I DON'T SPEAK
The world dosen't stop.

I love it. it is very expressive

wow. thats a nice poem...very strong..and stuff. lol. but its an AWESOME poem!!!

I like it but I think a good thing to add to every poem is more discriptive like pensive and stuff like that. A wonderful poem but I know in my work I try to use that little edge. your a great writer.

wao your poem..its 1 tense one...
well good try...no offence but it ws kinda bad
nwy..just in case...the world ain gona stop4 nothin...so move on
and big girlss totaly do cry
njyd it

I like it 2 thumbs up lol

how could anyone think its a bad poem? I think its tigger-rific! lol

what happend to that rythms
and all
lol
you a good writer speaking from da braini like that
but I guess you could do better by looking around you hearing the sounds
take it from your heart not da brain lke this:
(look for a poem Name : To a pretty girl)
looking forward to your advice

It's a nice poem I like it

You definately are a girl born with a pen in hand, beautiful writting, & so true, hugs to you my dear, Summerrainn

I...LUV IT!!!

Have you ever heard of Mibba.com?

Check it out! It's a creative writing web site,(I have an account btw =) ) where you can post your poems,articels,storys,etc.
you'd fit in very well my dear. ^_^

Its wonderful!
I can't stop saying that you're a great writer!
KEEP IT UP!!!

so strong and deep, plus it's filled with emotions! I swear you can enter this in a contest - if you know of any :P it's real powerful and I'm sure many can relate to the situation! keep writing, you're real talented =)

woah this is really deep
I love it
mma read it again
geez I'm going to call like scholastic or something lol