The inspiration

workin a camera Asked by samurai 7 months ago, 5 answers.

Hey can yall me tell what yall think of dis poem I wrote

"evry time I c you I feel da pain liftin
I know that my love 4 you was Heaven sendin
a message that we was meant 4 each other
women I rather be wit then u
your da vision that I c when I hear...

love
your the embodiment of evry thing heaven has 2 offer above
God is da true artist 2 create such a masterpiece
I dont even need heaven because when im wit you I already found peace"
so what yall think

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Answered by cyberchick on Apr 23, 2008, 01:28PM
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ah its great! your a true artist!

Answered by fau on Apr 23, 2008, 04:58PM
| 3947 answers.

aww how sweet

Answered by iamcool on Apr 23, 2008, 08:19PM
| 692 answers.

It's pretty good, exept you really shouldn't write poetry with all those abreviations and numbers.

Answered by butterfly_kiss3z on Apr 25, 2008, 05:43PM
| 1182 answers.

awww... I truly love it!! it speaks out what love is... it's simple, short, and say its message!! and like cyberchick has said, you are a true artist!! you should like give my boyfriend tips to write poems like that... like your poem "eternal love"...wow!! =)

Answered by samurai on Apr 26, 2008, 10:50PM
| 103 answers.

ooh I kinda left out a line ah well

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