Tell me what you thiink bout my new poem?

Lost love

You say that you loved me, den you say that dont
Make you your mind boy, because im so ful of hopes,
If you just going to make me mad, den wats th pointof talkin, if all your going to do is keep on stopping. You told me you used me once,
And...

den you tell me it aint going to be twice.

I dont want you messin wit my mind,
Because the only thing is you that ull find inside,
But you aint the type of guy that would take care of a girl, who would hel them when there falling, or holding there hair when they hurl.

Talking bout other girls saying dem hot! And I ask you one question, and the answer is not.
So you got to choose you up for love. Or you up to nothing, but in my world we can create something.

I think its good. as I said I dont write it but I love to read it. how long did it take you to write?

it olny took about 5 mintues... lol

but I gots much more