My song

Ok so I am writing a song tell me what you think of these lyrics:

There was a time when I thought we were perfect
That nothing could go wrong
But then the day would come
That my world would turn completely upside down
I saw you with her
I...

saw you last night
You said you were on a business trip
But I was stupid and I was fooled by you

Chorus

Tell me what I did wrong
Baby I don’t know what I did wrong
Did I not treat you with enough love?
Because I thought I gave you my heart
Did I not pay enough attention to you?
Was I greedy?
Was I controlling?
Tell me what I did wrong
Tell me what I did wrong

You said that you loved me
And then there you were with her
Walking all cuddled up next to her
As a watched from afar
I saw you kiss her on the lips
I wished that it was me
You were holding close
I wished it was me you were kissing

Chorus x2

Tell me what I did wrong I want to know

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