Is my poem good or bad?

Let the tears fall. Gravel on the ground...
Fall to pieces on the mound
let her cry. Nothing better to do
she dies alone with no one to say goodbye to...
Fall asleep. After crying herself dead...
Making the same statement as she bled...

for once...

she wanted to go the way.
That would help her fly...away
go around to the place. Where she was loved
but no one was there...It all was shoved
make someone notice, make someone care...
get someone to inspect and repair...

It was really really good. Did you write it?

WOOOW that WAS WELL GOOD A STAR TOP OF DA CLASS. LOL. you should like get an award or summink

yeah I wrote it ihave a bunch morez just e mail me if you want to read it