I wrote this song...any good?

I need to know (it still needs work)

Time goes by I never heard your name
but I always felt the same
every time I saw your face
it was sketched in my memory
for just me to see and I say

Chorus
I need to know
What you’ve been doing about...

me
I want to know how did you live without me
I need to know why its been so long
I need to know why our love is gone

Did you love me way back then,
Were we ever more than just friends
Was it something special to you
Did you even care---to be true
End of chorus

Life it goes by oh so fast
Watching the hourglass
I need to know my past
To make it through today

Still looking to find the truth
That life I thought I had with you
Its haunted me from day to day
I still need to find my way

And I say

Chorus
I need to know
What you’ve been doing about me
I want to know how did you live without me
I need to know why its been so long
I need to know why our love is gone

Did you love me way back then,
Were we ever more than just friends
Was it something special to you
Did you even care---to be true

Sounds like nice heart-felt tune lyrics...Good luck !!

I like it...would love to hear it set to music. :-)

what kind of song is it? like what genra do you think it would be in?

I love it, I think you have a talent there

That's a very nice song. I recommend picking up a guitar and playing it in front of an audience!

you put memorys in there, try to use three syllable words as little as possible

I really like it. it's very nice.

I really really like it a lot

id really like to hear the music. is it happy? sad slow fast good lyrics tho