I wrote a song. do you like it?

Please be bruital about it.. (lol) tell me if you hate it or whatever. Well here I go...

That girl (Title)

When I'm down you
here there to pick
me up when I'm
not there...

Are you going
to be that one
in my dreams when
I close my eyes...

I see that you
are the one for me..
The only one for me..
You and I are ment to be
You are that girl for me..
The only one I need...

It's you the girl in my
dreams.. The one
that see's who I really
want to be...
Thats why your
that girl for me..

Are you going to be
that one in my dreams
when I close my eyes
I see , that you are
the one for me...
The only one for me
that one I need..
your that one..
that makes me...
me...

Please comment (: I no.. It kinda sucks.. doesn't it?

it was good I like it

Well, I like it, other than the fact you copied most the song of of Disney Channel.

http://www.youtube.c...

thats copying someone elses song and putting retarted veses that no one can understand!!!

I didn't think I stole it.. I'll even take a picture and show you my hand-wrtting.. I wrote this.. so I don't know what you guys are talking about so srry..to disapoint..

I think it sounds cool

no you stole it.. you can take pics of you writing it but you can still remebered the song.. we are not stupid!! you copied it!!! go ahead take pics what ev! :]

It sounds good.
but it looks like somebody else wrote it
busted!

it makes no sence it sounds like that song from mulan or w.e kinda

u copied it off of the disney channel commerical just take the copying out then just work on it some more a little its a great song though good work

um..you copied the song!!=[=[=[ Busted!!