I want to let it go

Asked by nirvanafan 5 months ago, 7 answers.

The light blue tint of the summer sky
Holds my promises for a bright tomorrow
It gives me hope without saying so
But I know that it wants me to let it go

The silver stars that explode and
Fade into red frozen translucence
Give me a subtle wink before...

they pass
Telling me in secret to make this feeling last

The wildflowers glowing with their own form of sunshine
The kind that reflects the mindset of my healed heart
Bloom only to smile and remind me
That I've finally broken free

This poem is symbolic of my desire to let my inner struggles and anger go. I wrote it when I felt like I finally did move on. But there are still those times...someday, however, I will forget it for good.

What did you think?

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Answered by brit619 on Jun 16, 2008, 05:21PM
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omg this is the best poem that I have read this summer. I started top cry just a little

Answered by dangersteve316 on Jun 16, 2008, 05:39PM
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Brilliant. You know how to use words in a graceful manner that easily idetifies the story within the story.
Very well done!

Answered by fau on Jun 16, 2008, 05:58PM
| 3941 answers.

that was romantic!! are you a guy??

Answered by cenasnumberonelover on Jun 16, 2008, 06:00PM
| 18 answers.

sorry I didnt check your description describing you great poem!!! LOL

Answered by funadvice on Jun 17, 2008, 06:06PM
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wow excellent poem =D
my favourite bit is "Bloom only to smile and remind me
That I've finally broken free"
very cool!

Answered by imme on Jun 19, 2008, 01:27PM
| 829 answers.

amazing!!!
I loved it!

Answered by vultureofculture on Jun 19, 2008, 02:59PM
| 774 answers.

OMG AMAZING-NESS!

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