Graphic poem, do you like it?

Mommy Never Came
By: Britne Vinson

As I laid there in my bed
All I could think in my head
Is how you left me there alone
All over my body was his cologne
I remember how it all went down
He came into my room dressed like a clown
I looked at him with confused eyes
Was this going to be a surprise of mine?
He said come here and held out his hands
So I placed down my Barbie’s and head bands
I was young and had no idea
That this surprise of mine would involve my tears
I smiled and walked past the fan
He picked me up, and out you ran
I wondered why you left so quick
But daddy told me just to sit
So on his lap he kissed my cheek
Lifted up my skirt for just a peek
I began speak to ask what was this
But he cursed at me and pinch my wrist
I held in my cry I could tell he was mad
I wished my mom didn’t leave because I was very sad
He pulled out something from in his pants
I couldn’t see it all just at a glance
He began to move my panties and placed it inside
I yelled very loud and my dad moved me like a ride
I was five and didn’t like this new game
I screamed and cried wishing my mommy came
I kicked, hit, and scratched his face
Trying my hardest to get out of this place
He took it out and smacked me hard
I flew into my dresser and knocked over my cards
I crawled up into a ball
I felt red stuff on my thighs and my jaw
My daddy said that I was being bad
I should listen to him so I don’t make him mad
I said I don’t want to play with you anymore
As quick as I could I ran naked out my door
I fell down the steps because my legs were burning
I could not believe my daddy would hurt me
I heard him coming but I didn’t turn to see
I saw you mommy and told you to help me
You watched me stand there, tears strolling down
But you told me its okay just don’t make a sound
Then he took me by my hair
And pulled me back up the bloody stairs
My daddy threw me on my bed
And beat me hard and banged my head
Finally he left I laid and cried
Rubbing my head and holding my side
I hope no one has to ever feel that pain
That I felt, when I was five, and my mommy never came

wow that was simply amazing
not a lot of people write about subjects like this anymore
its all about love now
very good:D

Whoah.
That was... I cant even explain it
touching
AWESOME job