Here's a short poem I wrote to ponder on destiny, thoughts?

Here's a short poem I wrote to ponder on...

Destiny is where we are bound,
Is it surreal,
Or just a fantasy that...
Lingers on the edge of the earth,
As sure as the dolphin...
Swims in the sea,
Or a joke of paradox,
Going around swallowing,
Up all of...

its victims.

Written in 2003 on the way to a funeral, it was a family tragedy that happened this time of year. My great uncle lost his life in a fireworks warehouse explosion. Sometimes things happen in life that can cause you to think more deeply. I hope everyone has a happy and safe 4th of July.

What do you think of my poem?

I like it. Timidly written yet deep in soulful context.
Happy 4th my friend :D

loveeed it, : )