Can someone add some lines to this 2 poems I started??

Thunder Robot Asked by funadvice 4 months ago, 5 answers.

1st poem:

You made me cry, you told me lies,
But I can’t stand to say goodbye

2nd poem:

Times have changed and times are strange, here I come but I ain't the same...
Time's gone by, it seems to be...
You could have been a better friend to...

me...

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Answered by mariachitown on Jul 08, 2008, 12:59PM

But I will just walk away
and find better friends for the next great day.

Answered by laurenrs on Jul 08, 2008, 01:13PM

your the one who but these tears in my eyes
just forget you, and let me be

Answered by allmeroth on Jul 08, 2008, 01:55PM
| 174 answers.

ill be your friend
but who can I trust?
to find a new one
is a must 1st poem

Answered by skylarxo on Jul 08, 2008, 04:32PM
| 6 answers.

1st poem:
You made me cry, you told me lies,
But I can’t stand to say goodbye
Though the more I stay,
the longer the pain,
will stain
myself

2nd poem;
Times have changed and times are strange, here I come but I ain't the same...
Time's gone by, it seems to be...
We're growing apart, just you and me..
I would like to stay and be your friend, but would that really work out in the end?
Just come and tell me, don't be shy...
for I could never ever live a lie.

*Please tell me what you think!!! =) thanx*

Answered by marilynmanson on Jul 09, 2008, 01:45AM
| 35 answers.

I HAVE I THING TO SAY AND THAT IS I HHHAAATTTEEE SCHOOL ; (

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