Are these good lyrics?

Everyone is a let down it just depens on how far down they can go

And in every circle of friends theres a wh*ore
The one who flirts a little moooreee
But whos to saaayyy
This a social scene anyway
And everyone wants to explaore the new girl
Caught up...

in her own heart let the world
But if it doesnt exist
In the wooorld
But if it doesnt exist in the wooorld
And if you lie you dont deserve to have friends
If you lie you dont deserve to have them
If you lie you dont deserve to have friends
And if youuu lieee

You are a cell out butyou couldnt even do that riiight

There is way more to it but im thinking. So honestly what do you think. Do yuo think they are ok. Good or awesome like im a misician or something?

I LOVE IT!!! You really have great writing skills...I think you would do really good as musician but make sure that the beat is off the chain =D

this is WICKED AWESOME!!

sweetie,it's kinda cool but a bit too many grammar errors you might want to fix that